story idea :loosing grip

this film idea is about a girl who has has experienced loosing all her friends to a house fire at a birthday party for her,but there was someone there that night whom she thought looked suspicious , but strangely no one seems to remember him, at all.As Blake tries to over come with the strong memories, of that night she finds herself in a much more dangerous situation.  as she gets mysterious texts and phone calls from the same guy at the party that know one remembers clearly as he was dresses quiet darkly.He probes the idea that Blake was involved in that house fire, trying to set her up. 

post-scene : we will be an off distance shot of the train lights on the highway,the camera is spinning in a circle after concentrating at a tree in the moonlight, it will look gloomy and almost dreamy ,the narrator comes in,for a few moments and then voices off.

 scene one : the girl is sitting in her bedroom and she is reading a book ,she looks calm ,and then she gets up to look at a birthday present that her parents gave her that evening, she then stares at it for a while and gets up to leave the room.


scene two: the girl is then seen coming out of the steps of her house and slowly walking out towards the lake she gets a text which says 'you know ,its never good to stand near the woods alone, she then puts a weird face on and dismisses it,shaking her head  she walks further into the lake and then she gets another text saying 'you know, its not really good to keep secrets ...specially when i know them. she then looks worried ,as she see's something in the water ...drifting...she picks it up and it says 'i know what really happened at the house fire' she looks shocked and terrified and she drops it and falls to the ground ,she gets back up and picks her bag up and runs .